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Shop / first impressions of you
Impression of You (Take 4)
The original passage for revision was not provided. Therefore, I will create a sample passage for revision purposes:
Original: "John decided to go to the store because he needed to buy groceries. He grabbed his keys, locked the door, and headed to his car. The weather was surprisingly warm for a winter day, and the sun was shining brightly in the clear blue sky. As he drove to the store, John noticed the streets were unusually busy. When he arrived, he found a parking spot near the entrance and went inside."
Revised: "Motivated by the necessity of purchasing groceries, John made the decision to visit the store. He swiftly secured his keys, ensured the door was securely locked, and proceeded towards his vehicle. The winter day unexpectedly exhibited warmth, accompanied by a bright sun in the serene azure sky. During his journey to the store, John observed an atypical surge in street activity. Upon arrival, he successfully located a convenient parking space adjacent to the entrance before venturing indoors."
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